古堡牛郎 发表于 09.3.23 17:40:20

五律•诗坛唱和



　　五律#6;诗坛唱和

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诗坛多唱和，交友宜知心。
奇文一何短，痴情万丈深。
花间竹叶酒，湖畔柳枝荫。
师古不泥古，阳关有故人。

★逍遥叟★ 发表于 09.3.23 19:18:11



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★逍遥叟★ 发表于 09.3.23 19:29:29

呵 呵 学生自幼顽皮，疏于功课，才疏学浅，不通诗文，让先生见笑！

古堡牛郎 发表于 09.3.23 19:48:08

3# 逍遥叟
还是很不错的，立意与音韵均好，只个别句平仄脱律，很容易纠正的。
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